Okay... good. You are observing the margin lines and the rectangular structure. It feels like the Heart and rainbow flag are just stuck on and not really integrated. The leading the the "Valentines Dance Party" lines look like the default "auto" amount and is a bit wide. Is the date and place information the same font, but skewed in? There is a disconnect between the two... both for shape and leading.
I might make the Heart much larger and blown off of the left side of the page, the flag much smaller and placed along the bottom.
Okay... good. You are observing the margin lines and the rectangular structure. It feels like the Heart and rainbow flag are just stuck on and not really integrated. The leading the the "Valentines Dance Party" lines look like the default "auto" amount and is a bit wide. Is the date and place information the same font, but skewed in? There is a disconnect between the two... both for shape and leading.
ReplyDeleteI might make the Heart much larger and blown off of the left side of the page, the flag much smaller and placed along the bottom.